Ponderance of Life and Death

Ponderance of Life and Death

1 chapter / 118 words

Approximately half a minute to read

Description:

It is late and the speaker is attempting to relax, looking back on the hardships of life and the fact that it is moving faster.

Genres:

Writing, Poetry

Comments(12)

Jordi

over 4 years ago Jordi said:

It reminds me of going through a dark tunnel, but as your drive you see the light at then end, so your drive a little faster to see what lay ahead. Wonderful. -Keep writing! ~Jordi

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almost 7 years ago Fish Fingers and Custard said:

I like it, very dark, and then shows the light.

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almost 7 years ago Jessie said:

"Life is too precious a gift/To give up due to simple pain" this line is completely awesome, it's a great message and (intentionally or not) you nailed the rhyme with "too" and "to/due/to"

Photo on 7-4-12 at 12.35 am

almost 7 years ago Jessie said:

this is beautiful, it flows so nicely - it's very smooth. well done!

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