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It is late and the speaker is attempting to relax, looking back on the hardships of life and the fact that it is moving faster.
over 4 years ago Jordi said:
It reminds me of going through a dark tunnel, but as your drive you see the light at then end, so your drive a little faster to see what lay ahead. Wonderful.
over 6 years ago Fish Fingers and Custard said:
I like it, very dark, and then shows the light.
over 6 years ago Jessie said:
"Life is too precious a gift/To give up due to simple pain" this line is completely awesome, it's a great message and (intentionally or not) you nailed the rhyme with "too" and "to/due/to"
this is beautiful, it flows so nicely - it's very smooth. well done!
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