Open Door Closed Shut

Open Door Closed Shut

1 chapter / 173 words

Approximately less than a minute to read

Description:

For the Billy Collins poetry contest- I see writing a description of this poem pointless because I feel that as is the case with all poetry, I should leave the interpretation up to the reader. Trust me, there are endless interpretations.

Genres:

Writing, Memoir, Poetry

Comments(8)

Sam_0063 square

almost 6 years ago B. D. Legan said:

As I read this, it was like a tiny voice was shouting the words in my head. This could easily become a song - a song I'd listen to. You captured the essence perfectly, and left me in awe. :) -BD

Pa065153

almost 6 years ago Rosa Saba said:

First two lines: my favourite. :) You're good at rhyming poetry, it doesn't seem stiff or awkward like couplets can be. RS

Mea

over 6 years ago Petra said:

loved it!!!nice rhymes:)

Sports day

over 6 years ago Alison L. said:

Wow! This is great. REALLY AMAZING!!! :))) I can really see the effort that you put into this! Gooddd luck with the contest!!

PS: Would you mind reading a recent short story of mine? THANKS!

Reviews(1)

Chandelure_by_sterlingcynder-d3btdtu

over 6 years ago Mækir Vilemist said:

Very good conveying of inner conflict! It infects me with an enigmatic toxin that is both bitter and quite overwhelmingly sweet... This is just great beyond what I can say...