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Run
2 chapters / 449 words
Approximately 2 minutes to read
Description:
-ContestOver- In my entry for the road trip flash contest all I can say is... Teenagers these days. ** (Sigh) Wow, you guys... this story is causing me a lot of brain work. At first I was just going to keep the story at this. short and sweet. Then I was planning on continuing with the book... then I voted against that and stuck to the original plan. Right now I am in a drone zone (my very lame phrase for the state of not knowing if I should continue or not; which I made up in about five seconds.) Please be patient while I try to figure this out. For now chapter two is locked :) ~~DRONE ZONE~~
Comments(98)
7 months ago Natalie McNichol said:
This was really good! The girls were a bit annoying at times, but I think you could go a lot of different ways with this. I don't super love the cover (it kinda looks like it's snowing), but other than that, great job!
11 months ago Erin Bywater said:
I'm excited to read more! I really like it! It seems kinda mean to leave her mom behind though. (I would do it.) :P
11 months ago Emily Swiers said:
I really thought the title on the first chapter/page was clever. You wrote just enough details without going over board.
The story was simple and a very nice read.
11 months ago Hayley Rue Mockingjay said:
Liking it so far! Are you going to add more?
Reviews(6)
about 1 year ago Niya said:
I love the way you put detail in the story. Your description is great!
over 1 year ago Savannah Stimpson said:
I like how the girls weren't really concerned with the mom. It made the story hilarious to read. Everytime they laughed I laughed with them. Great job!