1 chapter / 1046 words

Approximately 5 minutes to read


Amanda Juniper, playing one of her favourite virtual reality games, finds herself within the game itself, running for her life from the get go. Is this really an alien world in which she has lost herself, or will she find herself in a place that is closer to home than she'd ever imagine?



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over 1 year ago Marie said:

This was so cool! Reminds me of Sword Art Online.


over 1 year ago CEMO said:

Love the pace of this. Are you planning on writing anymore because this would be a great first chapter!

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over 1 year ago Bennett Fairley said:

Yay for girl gamers! I really enjoyed this. Congrats on being one of the winners! :)



over 1 year ago Deborah Ademola said:

A very interesting concept, and I like that the protagonist is a girl-gamer. I did feel that a lot of the beginning action could have been brought into real-time; i.e, instead of saying "I had been doing X, Y and Z," actually showing us Amanda's thoughts right as she plays with her Console. There are also a few typo errors that need fixing. Otherwise, I like this concept and will continue reading.