Virtual Midnight

Virtual Midnight

3 chapters / 1991 words

Approximately 10 minutes to read

Description:

{WINNER OF GAME OF LIVES CONTEST} What do you do when you're afraid?

Prompt: create a short story about someone who became trapped inside of a virtual reality game.

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12 months ago Sports Live said:

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about 1 year ago Josephine F. said:

Whoops, sorry, I only meant your first paragraph. I'm not in the right mind-set right now. Also, I'm very sorry for commenting on this twice. I just thought that I should clarify. :3

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about 1 year ago Josephine F. said:

This was very interesting, I really liked this. The only thing I would recommend is that you break up your paragraphs a little more. On a computer this formatting of normal sized paragraphs is quite difficult to read over. Fixing this would make it so much easier to read. Other than that I wasn't able to spot any grammatical errors and or plot inconsistencies. I really enjoyed this. Good luck on the contest. :)

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about 1 year ago Sierra Johnson said:

I LOVED your story!!!! :D Could you check mine out? It's called CyberSpace

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