Ein Tag in Langeoog

Ein Tag in Langeoog

1 chapter / 1052 words

Approximately 5 minutes to read

Description:

I wrote this story a long time ago, (when I was about..nine, or ten) and my teacher(then) loved it. (Why, I don't know...) The cover is a Strandkorb. It is a finished piece.

Genres:

Action, Adventure, Memoir

Comments(6)

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almost 6 years ago Annabel G. said:

You wrote this when you were nine (or ten)? Wow, I definetely did NOT write like this when I was nine (or ten). I only wish. Lol, nice job.

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almost 6 years ago Lenny Bean said:

Amme Airotkiv your awesome and i also love your books

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almost 6 years ago Jessica T said:

Didn't really understand the German but still liked it.

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about 6 years ago Roaming<3Free said:

Interesting... I think you need to add more details... well not a little a LOT. It is unclear about who you are. Are you a young girl or maybe a teen? You should also expand on how Germany looks. Some of the sentences are choppy. Also, the characters are not very clear. In other words, I love how you use a foreign language (in this case, German). I hope that wasn't too harsh. This is totally going somewhere, though. Keep writing! XoXo, Roaming