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1 day ago Lealah Greene said:
I love this and how it could happen great ideA
13 days ago Guinn Holle said:
This is pretty good. I think this has a lot of potential.
17 days ago Lizzy said:
I love your book! It's awesome.
20 days ago A.L. Allen said:
Hello! Sorry I'm so late, Sweetheart. I just finished reading this and I must say I have no complaints! You are phenomenal and I would love to see more of this. -Yours truly, A.L.A
about 23 hours ago reefa said:
It seems pretty interesting so far. Like some others have mentioned before, the grammar could use a bit of work, but generally it's a good story. I like the idea of it, and it's quite enjoyable to read. However, sometimes it feels a bit wonky, if that makes sense. If you can make the story (as in paragraphs and sentences) flow together better, it would be even nicer to read. The characters are pretty nice as well, so that makes it more fun to read. Besides that, I think it would also be nice if there were more descriptions of the world and area in general, to provide a better image of the setting. I hope this helped somehow!
2 days ago TK Walker said:
Follow for follow.
Vision Zero does have a lot potential. Grammar and punctuation needs to be worked on. However, that does not take away from the fact the story is good. I will make sure to keep up with the story, with a follow back! :)