Vulnerable Limits

Vulnerable Limits

1 chapter / 73 words

Approximately half a minute to read

Description:

*cover art by the talented Rhina Matsuda* sooo i wrote this around 3 am...on a piece of origami paper. it is one of a very few non-rhyming poems i have written, and im not sure if i like it yet :)

Genres:

Writing, Poetry

Comments(15)

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almost 5 years ago Zachary Cohn said:

The last line is truly shattering. Well done, well done.

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almost 5 years ago Zachary Cohn said:

The last line is truly shattering. Well done, well done.

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over 5 years ago Allison Steele said:

I love your use of imagery

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over 5 years ago Kaitlyn Elizabeth said:

Beautiful. You walk the fine line between overloading imagery and just plain clarity. I find that I have a lot of issues with that. Everything here is solid, and I rather enjoy the fact that you didn't have a rhyming scheme in this. Overall, really great but I wish it was longer.

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