I lived in a Zoo and I saw

I lived in a Zoo and I saw

1 chapter / 110 words

Approximately half a minute to read

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cover art done by the AMAZING AWSOME Sydney Lacroix

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6 months ago Arietta Coleman said:

Hmmm, very well written and I love how its from the koalas point of view. I love koalas even though they are actually known to be aggressive. :D

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8 months ago Selena Brooks said:

Nice poem! I initially thoughts it was about a person, but I loved the twist that it was from an animal's point of view. Great work!

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8 months ago copperfalcon said:

This is awesome! It's creative, amazing, and nothing like I've ever read before. Line seven, "I" needs to be capitalized, and I think you meant set not see, but otherwise I saw no more errors. Good job, and keep writing!

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9 months ago Lily Chen said:

This is such an adorable poem! I loved how you wrote the poem from the point of a view of a koala and what a zoo experience is like for an animal inside the cages. Happy writing!

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4 months ago Kiamesha Denise Sims said:

Nice.

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8 months ago Sophia Edwards said:

First sentence, I thought it was about a person who lived in a zoo (like the movie). Then when I realized it was an animal (and an adorable little koala) I was pleasantly surprised. It was an adorable piece that made me wonder how do animals feel in their zoo pens. ( i live near a zoo and sometimes visit).

Super cute poem