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The Writer's Daughter
1 chapter / 1496 words
Approximately 7 minutes to read
Description:
Winner of the Reading Promise Contest. Thanks guys for voting!
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Comments(16)
11 months ago er!c hutchersten said:
good job. i like the opening with the letter and from there on it was still good
11 months ago Shireen Bean Zaineb said:
Oh wow!! this was soooo sweet, you totally deserved to win!! ur story was so touching and sad, congratulations!!
11 months ago Taylor Chadwick said:
Heartbreakingly beautiful, I enjoyed every moment.
11 months ago Pelumi Sholagbade said:
*sniff* Beauiful..... sad............. breathtaking..........
Reviews(3)
4 months ago casey chon said:
this is so great. i think it really deserved to win the contest. congrats !
the ending was kind of =\ for me, compared to the rest of the story, but you could maybe expand on a few more of the points that the other writers mentioned. this is so great, i would read this book if you ever thought to finish and publish it = D
5 months ago Allison Irene (Alli) said:
I really enjoyed this! It seems like such a beautiful tradition and the writing is well done. I just long for more details. Did the dad ever have a hit children's book? How did he die? What does the daughter do in her mother town? Just little things. Also the end is very sad and touching but I don't think "the day he died also marked when our tradition died." is a emotional enough ending. I think it's a good sentace but maybe not the right one to end on. I really enjoyed it, so glad it won the Reading Promise Contest!