What have I done?

What have I done?

1 chapter / 1557 words

Approximately 8 minutes to read

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Short story about happiness that turns into horror in the blink of an eye. Sometimes we act with only some of the information in a situation. Sucks to be us...

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about 4 years ago Willow Cimorene said:

Wow...that ending was a little. Um. Intense. I think that's one of the best twists I've ever read.

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over 5 years ago Haley Forte said:

Sorry, I meant "crap". I hate the fact that you can't edit your own comments~ =___=

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over 5 years ago Haley Forte said:

The first words I said after reading this were, "holy shit". That was one of the best twists I've ever read- seriously. I've read A LOT of books and stories, so that's quite a compliment. Now, I think I'm going to go and ponder the meaning of life. (PS, you are an AWESOME writer, SUBSCRIBED!)

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almost 6 years ago Amber Bender said:

That was pretty Epic!!!! loved it, and Just to say, fail on the guys part for stabbing his bro, but... yeah!!! awesome!!!

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over 5 years ago RedMasquerade17 said:

Wow... You have made me speechless. I had to read the last part twice to realize that it was his brother "and his brother's wife".... Wow... Yikes...

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about 6 years ago Cassidy Reves-Sohn said:

really great. the only way i had an inkling of what was going to happen was that i found this under horror. Your work with details was really well-done. I especially loved the part about the religious song, about being lost and found. he was certainly about to become very lost. good job!