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Approximately 8 minutes to read
Short story about happiness that turns into horror in the blink of an eye. Sometimes we act with only some of the information in a situation. Sucks to be us...
over 3 years ago Willow Cimorene said:
Wow...that ending was a little. Um. Intense. I think that's one of the best twists I've ever read.
almost 5 years ago Haley Forte said:
Sorry, I meant "crap".
I hate the fact that you can't edit your own comments~ =___=
The first words I said after reading this were, "holy shit".
That was one of the best twists I've ever read- seriously. I've read A LOT of books and stories, so that's quite a compliment.
Now, I think I'm going to go and ponder the meaning of life.
(PS, you are an AWESOME writer, SUBSCRIBED!)
over 5 years ago Amber Bender said:
That was pretty Epic!!!! loved it, and Just to say, fail on the guys part for stabbing his bro, but... yeah!!! awesome!!!
almost 5 years ago RedMasquerade17 said:
Wow... You have made me speechless. I had to read the last part twice to realize that it was his brother "and his brother's wife".... Wow... Yikes...
over 5 years ago Cassidy Reves-Sohn said:
really great. the only way i had an inkling of what was going to happen was that i found this under horror. Your work with details was really well-done. I especially loved the part about the religious song, about being lost and found. he was certainly about to become very lost. good job!