Well that got your attention :)
Ok guys, I need help! I started a novel and got a ways into it and then enlisted for USMC so now I have training and no time to write. I posted in Collab area but I'm not really looking for a collab. I'm just looking for some peer-editing.
That is the link to my story. It's kind of confusing or so I've been told. I'm trying to fix it but don't know what to fix. So anyone who want's to read it