Marni R.

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almost 4 years ago Kassidy said:

Hi my fellow Potterhead. LoL. Would you like to swap? Could you please heart/ give me feedback on my Harry Potter fan-fiction "Muggles and Mudbloods"? It is a dystopian take on the Harry Potter story based on the altenate scenario of if Voldemort had killed Harry Potter at the Battle of Hogwarts and ruled the world. It is told from the point of view of a Muggle girl named Octavia (original character) who must hide what she really is or be enslaved like the other Muggles. She hides herself to protect her Mudblood twin sister, Julia, and her adopted family. But will her cover be blown when she falls for a Death Eater, and will she take part in the underground Order of the Phoenix? Duh duh duh! Hehe. I am actually working on a play adaption for the story for my school's fall play for 2016. Any who, that's why I would really enjoy feed back because I always like honest opinions about my writing so that I can improve! Here's the link:! I will read anything you want me to in return! Thanks!


almost 4 years ago Writing Fire said:

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May your Writing Ever be in Your Favor.


almost 4 years ago Sebastian Matthew said:

Hello! You, being a teenager on figment, have been invited to join my group "Teenage Figs", here you can do whatever you want along with your fellow teens, you can talk, you can swap, you can share stories and inspiration… You can pretty much do whatever. So come one come all to "Teenage Figs". Here is a link if you would like to join: Thanks, Sebastian :P


over 4 years ago Duncan Ashbirch said:

hello, i am in a heart based fanfiction contest, and i would really like it if you read and heart my story called "The Children of The Serpent" please? i will read something of yours in return if you like


over 4 years ago Sebastian Matthew said:

Hey wanna swap? If so please read and heart my novel "Grim". Please note that it is not the short story Grim that I have written but it is my work in progress novel Grim. If you do swap I will return the favor asap! Sorry if I already asked you or if you don't like swaps.

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(over 5 years ago)

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(over 5 years ago)

I liked it, but to me it seemed like both of the character's voices were the same. Also, I found like two grammar things to fix: hands... Read More »