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over 1 year ago Ae Clane said:

please heart "Separate Dimensions".

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over 1 year ago Lorelle Shorten said:

Hi there. I was wondering if you'd like to swap? Please could you read some of one of my books "Tarnished Reflections" or "Obtaining Lucidity"? I know they are quite long as they are novels, but if you could read even a bit of either one of them, and let me know what you think, that would be brilliant! I am happy to read anything of yours, just let me know which :)

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over 1 year ago Margy said:

Would you mind reading my story: The Promise I Plan to Keep http://figment.com/books/510237-The-Promise-I-Plan-To-Keep i am willing to read and comment on your writing too if you check out mine and if you like it, please heart it. I promise it will be well thought out commentary. I am trying to win a contest!! thank you and good luck on more of your writing!

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over 1 year ago Emily Swiers said:

Hi there, if you have time could you check out my short story REGRET (500 words long) and please leave a heart.

-Feel free to post on my wall if you would like me to return the favor! I am sincerely sorry if I have posted on your wall before.

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over 1 year ago Kayy said:

Hi! I just wrote a story called The Killer for the Seventeen Magazine contest and i'm looking for some constructive criticism. I'd love it if you could check it out. I'm willing to swap if you'd like. Thank you and sorry if i've already asked! :]

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The Killer

(over 1 year ago)

I liked this. Definitely intense, I thought the twist at the end was great. A couple of constructive criticisms:I wish I knew more ab... Read More »

Theater (seventeenmag)

(over 1 year ago)

I think I'll go out on a limb and disagree with the previous two reviewers. I don't really understand why this story exists. Let me expla... Read More »