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    What happens when you meet a character you created, what happens when they aren't happy with what you wrote them?

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    Van has fallen head over heels for a young woman named Belle he met at a bus stop one day, and since then time has stopped for him. Li…

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    JulyChallenge Sally and her team rush to defeat their foe only to find him already taken care of, by a monster disguised as Sally'…

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    The Call of Duty

    Dani and her team mates work together to kill terrorists and make a game of their kill counts

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    Chasing Alice

    Alice is their drug. Their high. Alice makes them feel alive. Alice is a live audience at a concert for four friends Marc "March H…

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    The Dark Dream Team

    Kana and Joey have been best friends since Joey hatched.

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over 1 year ago Zoey NB said:

Hello! I am in the neighborhood looking for some feedback on my newest story Bad Input. As this is for a class assignment due May 5th, I ask that you respond as soon as possible. Anything you have to say is greatly appreciated. (Comment on my profile whatever you’d like me to read.) Thank you for your time, and have a good day.


almost 2 years ago K. Stevens said:

Hi! You commented on my forum post 4 days ago and I never knew about it. So I apologize for that! If you're still interested, you can critique any work that I've got up (although "Dakota" has been reviewed enough times, I think). Anything of yours that you would like me to review? I might not be able to get to it until Tuesday the 16th, but it will definitely be by Tuesday. :)

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almost 2 years ago Alex Jones said:

I'm in the middle of writing right now, but I'll be sure to read your other story before I pick up my writing tomorrow, and thanks again for your kind words and advice.

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almost 2 years ago Alex Jones said:

I'd just like to thank you for your kind words about my story "Desolation" and I was just wondering weather you think I should write more about before when my story is set or after it's over?


almost 2 years ago Leah Ellis said:

Hey thank you for reviewing my story "perception" ..the reason a lot.. and I mean a lot of my words and phrases are so messed up is because I had originally hand wrote this story, and in order for me to transfer it into word as quick as possible I used Siri on my Iphone, but I did not check properly if it got any of my words right. I'll be fixing them as soon as possible. Again thank you so much for reviewing my story... I'll be happy to review any of yours if you would like.

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My Reviews

Ned: A One-Act Play

(almost 2 years ago)

My. God. The pure, unadulterated emotion in this piece left me rocked. Grammatically I couldn't see anything wrong, and I can complet... Read More »


(almost 2 years ago)

for a piece I like the simplicity of it, but I agree with the other reviewer, I would like to see more. for a simple piece I think it wou... Read More »