Ajax (Jordan)

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19 days ago Natalie Dunning said:

Oh wow! I was somewhat thinking it might just be really old English or Latin or something. I really wanna find out what it means though lol. I might look it up sometime in the future. I was meaning to post on your wall too to thank your for your feedback as well, it's greatly appreciated and I think it'll help me improve on my poetry. You seem like a very experienced writer :)

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4 months ago Morgan Lee J said:

Thanks for your comment on my poem! I wrote that for a poetry class in college. I forget what its specifically called. I think it's called a mosaic poem so the goal was for it to be structurally appealing... but yeah, I'm not that good at speaking words, but writing them and then having people read them is so much easier!

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6 months ago ShadowKingLegette said:

My favorite sonic game is Sonic 3 and Knuckles.

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6 months ago ♡Stephanie♡ said:

You're very welcome. I saw that it was updated in the library earlier and the title caught my eye. When I started reading your writings, some of them were very relating to me in ways. Was happy to have read it when I had the chance. Love your style.

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6 months ago Steph A. said:

My wall has become a ghost town, I guess. Meh, whatever. And, yeah, my writing about work kind of helped. Definitely gained a bit of my sanity back.

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(4 months ago)

Asking a bunch of questions isn't an unusual thing in poetry. The rhyme scheme is a nice touch, but you often break it and you really don... Read More »

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(6 months ago)

I'm going to have to agree with Joseph. You created a pattern for yourself, and it was a good pattern. This issue is you broke it on seve... Read More »