Miriam Barton

My Writings

  • Duo
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    The Perfect Duo

    A dancer and a drummer Perfection on stage.

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  • Epoch
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    #offthepage Contest Submission<br><br>Please enjoy! Feedback and comments are greatly appreciated.

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  • Storm
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    Clearing Storm

    On top of a hill, I whisper this poem to myself, during a clearing storm.

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  • 3
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    Adam's Ale

    Everything has something different about itself than others.

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  • 1
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    This Heart of Mine

    The heart. A tear. A smile. And love. Yours, mine, and ours... Unreal.

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  • Till the dew drops
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    'Till the Dew Drops

    Something most people tend to walk past, acknowledge for a few seconds during a drive until the scene passes- This is a poem that'l…

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Talk to me!


over 1 year ago Ae Clane said:

Good day! If you have the time, please read one of my prose poems and let me know what you think about it. Also feel free to follow me. Thank you. :)


over 2 years ago James said:

Hello, I contacted you about a month ago for a swap, which I have not completed. I was just wondering if you would still like to swap? If so, would you still like me to read "The Perfect Duo" and "Epoch"? Thank you so much.


over 2 years ago An Evanescent Moment said:

hi,sorry its a bit late you asked me to do a swap a couple of days ago,I've finally had time to get back to you and I've read your poem,it was truly amazing.In return could you read Mirror Mirror.I would really appreciate it.Thanks :)


over 2 years ago Sydney Stapleton said:

Swap? Please read "Carnival" and I'll return the favor.


over 2 years ago James said:

Hello, I was just wondering if you would like to swap? I'm best at reviewing poetry, but I will also read short stories and novels. Thank you so much.

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My Reviews

The Pointe

(over 4 years ago)

I think that your descriptions are really good, I think that as a novel it would make a bit more sense for readers. But as an excerpt the... Read More »

Cost of Revenge

(almost 5 years ago)

Yo. ^^. The idea is brilliant, I love this kind of thing- and I've only read the first chapter but I'm hooked. Like many have said alr... Read More »