Jackie Yang

My Writings

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    Up In Smoke

    Would love literary critique, particularly on wordings/characterization! Please heart if you think it is well-written! Thanks :D

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    These Lonely Nights

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    Instructions for Assembly

    Gently fold the top flaps over and tuck the tab in, carefully creasing the corners to form perfect right angles. Place on a tall shelf…

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    Who, Me?

    Who, me? Kill Mildew? Please, I was watching All About Eve and picking off cherry cordials. Cover by the amazing Jess'ka Krause!

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    Lights Out

    It was as if a gust of wind had blown all the candles out on the birthday cake. </br> Nora Stokes is just a teenage girl working her …

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    Chorus of Crickets

    I could never see that in the end, I would really come to miss this place. **Heads up: "waipo" means maternal grandmother in Chine…

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over 2 years ago CeceO (On&off) said:

Hello, will you like to swap? If you do, please check out my WIP 'On the Run', thanks so much!


almost 3 years ago Melanie Camacho said:

Swap? If so please read Andrew Stone and heart it IF you like it! Thank you have a good day.

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about 3 years ago Angelimar W said:

Hey, I saw your wonderful, perfect and stunning covers and thought you'd fit perfectly in my group! I'd really want you to be one of the cover makers of 'Stunning Cover Makers', here's the link: http://figment.com/groups/28098-Stunning-Cover-Makers Hope you can go and fill in the form to start making covers for people who can't do it for themselves! Have a nice day!


about 3 years ago writersblock101 said:

Hi there! I've entered a contest on Tallenge- a writing website where you can win money for your stories. I'm hoping for votes, so I'll critic, review, heart, whatever, one of your stories in exchange for your vote on Tallenge!

http://www.tallenge.com/vote/vote.aspx?vid=eafae9f2-6dd8-4778-bffe-b61676ba6379 You have to pick an opponent story and then vote for mine I guess. Sorry, it's weird. Let me know! :)

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over 3 years ago kas is actually kas said:

"Maybe some folks are alcoholics and others are just voluntary drunks.... Maybe some have drinking problems, while others have problems enough to drink." -George Jones

Savannah Blakely, an alcoholic and a smoker is haunted by her brother's untimely death. She is stuck at a dead end job, and isnt getting any younger. She acts upon a spur the moment decision and drives to Nashville. When she finds a man with connections to a record label, she feels that her life is finally coming together. Of course, she has been wrong many times before.

"Overall, Whiskey, Cigarettes and Something More was a great read. You’ve got something going with this main character, I think. With a strong enough voice, she can turn out to be very intriguing." -Snicker Sneebee

I need YOUR opinion on my novel. Sure I'll swap. Anything 8 minutes and under. :)

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Dead, Sweet Boy

(about 7 years ago)

return read: minor problems >> dead, sweet boy So I've read the first couple chapters of this, and I love the premise. It's haunting,... Read More »

Dead, Sweet Boy

(about 7 years ago)

I've just finished the first chapter, and I'm really getting into this story. I like the voice of your MC, and the unique twist on the pl... Read More »