Xoe Louise

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over 4 years ago Rawnie the Braveheart said:

Hey interested in my story “Bye Bye Baby”? Based on the Ramones song this is my entry for a contest. So wanna swap? Please give me your feedback and heart and I will do the same! (Sorry if you don’t swap or I already asked!)


almost 5 years ago Heidi L. said:

I'm writing to you in dire predicament right now. I'm currently being suspended 100,000 feet in the air, and a free read on my story, "Where the Blackbirds Fly", is the only thing that will save me. So I ask that you please help me. Thank you. ;) If we must, I can swap, as long as you post what you want me to read on my WALL. But a free read would, you know, save my life.


almost 5 years ago ➳FollowYourArrow ♥ said:

Hello care to swap? If so copy this handy little link into your computer and check out my TWO minutes piece called Hollow! http://figment.com/books/528677-Hollow

Sorry if you don't swap


almost 5 years ago Mackenzie Kelley said:

Hello there, sorry for intruding on your space, but I was wondering if you would be so kind as to read my story, It's Not Okay. It's only a two minute read. If you don't do free reads, no worries, just post a swap on my profile and I will read yours as well. Thanks!


almost 5 years ago Margy said:

would you mind reading my story: This Has to Be What Forever Feels Like or the promise i plan to keep i am willing to read and comment on your writing too if you check out mine and if you like it, please heart it. I promise it will be well thought out commentary. I am trying to win a contest!! thank you and good luck on more of your writing!

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(over 4 years ago)

Okayyyyyy! I liked it (see hearts :)! I do think you need to show us what is happening rather than simply telling. Flesh out the dialo... Read More »

Let Me Touch You

(over 5 years ago)

Okey Dokey...For a start I am going to warn you that I will be honest (maybe brutally so) but I really do mean to help you and not hurt y... Read More »