25 days ago ShardsOfGlass said:

Heya, I owe you a critique for Joy & Misery in return for you reading You Watched Me Fall and I just wanted to let you know I am going to do yours now. I just finished the one before you. I didn't want you to think I'd forgotten or something. Hopefully I can get it to you by tomorrow, all going to plan as my life seems to be going choas on me at the mo. XD

25 days ago likeclockwork itrhymes said:

Black holes so deep you don't even know you're falling....sigh. So romantic and lovely! I think your poem should be the national anthem. When I'm Dictator of the Universe I will make sure that top-priority.

25 days ago likeclockwork itrhymes said:

Haymitch? *raised eyebrow* lol. Of course by Haymitch you mean Finnick ;)

26 days ago Chelsea Celeste said:

There's nothing wrong with your making him a boy. It helps the reader picture the character. I totally get that the character is disconnected. I saw that and took it into consideration. But when you literally put the reader into the work, girls have to read "you" and picture a he. It could seem a bit disconnected for them, it did for me at first. Again though, I wouldn't change that in that work, it's great the way it is, I just want you to keep that in the back of your head next time you write(:

about 1 month ago Whitney Zahar said:

My pleasure, Lucy! Totally understand your point about the mental hopelessness of the character. Hey, I think you inspired me to write some fanfics of my own! :)