Anna Eshelman

My Writings

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    The Price of Talent (Under Construction)

    In a world where nothing is guaranteed, the World's Entertainment Agency promises safety and comfort to the most talented teenagers in…

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    Ava is part of a race of deadly assassins known as the Companions. Each girl is trained to kill using the simplest of methods: seducti…

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    The Box and the Locket

    The story of a love triangle, as told by the sky. This was for the Soulbound Contest but, unfortunately, didn't quite make it into the…

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    The Boy in the Window

    When I first spotted the boy, I thought he was just a figment of my imagination. But what is he, really?

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    Discussions with Thunderstruck

    This is just me "interviewing" the boys of Thunderstruck in an effort to get to know them a little better.

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    I was inspired by a wedding that I just attended where the bride and groom wrote their own vows. So, here are my vows to my future hus…

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over 2 years ago CeceO (On&off) said:

Hello, care to swap/review? Pls read my WIP ON THE RUN, thanks so much!


over 3 years ago Aurora Sanders said:

Hello valued follower!

I have a very important announcement regarding how I’m going to be posting the majority of my works on this site from now on.

Please take the time to comment on the post so you can continue to have access to my works.

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over 3 years ago Elizabeth Solomon said:

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Hey, my name is Elizabeth, and I have a new cover shop. If you need one, or know someone who does, or are just plain bored, please check it out. XOXO, E.S.

Ford mustang

over 3 years ago CeceO (On&off) said:

Hello, care to review my WIP ON THE RUN? Thanks so much, its greatly appreciated!


over 3 years ago S.J. Bouquet said:

Hello :) I am going to college soon, and I won't have time for a job. Because of this, money is an issue. Oh college... *sigh* Anyways, I figured that while I still have free time, I can write a story, and publish it on no cost to me. If I put an ebook up, maybe I can let it sit there. I can get some money, and won't have to stress out about scrounging up the green just so I can eat.

Why am I telling you all this? Well, I was hoping you'd read my story, critique it, point out flaws, help me perfect this thing before I put it on Amazon.

Thank you for your time :) If you don't want to do this, that's totally fine. I know I'm asking a lot. Have a good day!

-S.J. Bouquet

P.S. My story-

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My Reviews

Trails of Darkness

(almost 4 years ago)

Paragraph 1 after the break. This paragraph works. The only gripe I have with it is your sentence structure. All of your sentences are... Read More »

Trails of Darkness

(almost 4 years ago)

Paragraph 14: Lis is getting really worked up here. Are you trying to show that she’s distraught and emotionally drained? She’s coming... Read More »