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    Sugar

    Lili thought that Ash was dead, but he barges in through her front door one day and eats a bagel. This is vampires vs vampire hunters…

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    Skinned

    Toxins pervade the air. Trees are a myth. On a dying Earth, the opportunity to breathe fresh air, to see a myth is one worth dying fo…

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    Forest Siren

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    Age of Heroes

    Because I can't understand the Iliad. Must Homer list EVERYONE who fought in the Trojan War? I understand that it was meant to be spo…

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    Only Weakness

    The entire Hunger Games from Cato's point of view. Credit to Suzanne Collins. I love Alexander Ludwig. Comments and reviews are appr…

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    Shining Armor

    WORK IN PROGRESS. CURRENTLY UNDER RECONSTRUCTION. Constructive comments and reviews are very appreciated. I will shower you with lov…

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over 2 years ago Daniel Jimenez said:

Joshuadrunk

over 2 years ago TheLonelySlayer said:

LCIR,

Thank you for reading & commenting on my short story There's Always Next Year?. I appreciated your input during the early stages of my piece. It is now published and available for purchase. I hope you'll do me the honor of picking up a copy. Thank you. :-)

(Sorry for the double post, but thanks for reading both stories!)

Joshuadrunk

over 2 years ago TheLonelySlayer said:

LCIR,

Thank you for reading & commenting on my short story My Afternoon With Dominic. I appreciated your input during the early stages of my piece. It is now published and available for purchase. I hope you'll do me the honor of picking up a copy. Thank you. :-)

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almost 3 years ago Matsuo Risa said:

Psst. Hey wanna swap? If you read any of my books on my page I will be happy to read something under 30 mins. Just tell me what you want me to read and I will read it. But here's the thing. You have to go first because I am tired of people skipping out on my swaps or tricking me. Also don't forget to tell me which book you read! If your interested tell me what I should read and I will leave either constructive criticism or a heart! Thanks! ^-^

The vampire diaries

over 3 years ago Shammi said:

Hey you up for a swap? If so, let me know what I can read of yours and I will be glad to tell you what you can read in return (:

~Shamina

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Second sentence of the letter. I would take out the dash and just make it a separate sentence. Most kids don't really use dashes in the... Read More »

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Capitalize if in the second sentence. I like your opening; it's very compelling. It makes me want to know the girl. I think godforsake... Read More »