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about 1 month ago CC Sapaisa Lorraine said:

Hey! Sorry for not getting back to this in 2 years. But I finally did! If you still wanted to return the swap, you may but if you don't, I'm not going to be upset. Thank you so much for giving me the opportunity to read such a beautiful piece of art


10 months ago Andrea Maller said:

Hi! I'm trying to get feedback on a novel I'm working on called Vision Zero. I would appreciate any and all comments you have about how I could improve it. Sorry if I already asked. Thanks!!!


over 1 year ago Karla said:


Samantha is just 16 years old when she find out she doesn't have much time left. She is in love with Cameron, but every time he gets close to her, it kills her slowly and painfully. Will she choose to die painfully for her love? Will she give up her love, to live longer? Please read her story :)

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over 1 year ago sugarplum said:

I seriously still go back and read your poems all the time. You haven't posted anything new lately, so I hope all is well!


over 1 year ago Serious Lake said:

Hi there!

I have a new story up called "Ocean Devotion". It's the beginning of a now novel of mine, and I'd love some critiques. Let me know if you'd like to swap! :)

Note: There is only one chapter, so I'll swap for one chapter of your story, or something 10 mins or less!

This is a critique swap, so I'd love some meaningful criticism, and I'll leave the same.

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My Reviews

Two-Part Invention in Words

(over 2 years ago)

I loved the pacing of this and the short, sort of vignette-styled sections that you told your character's story in. You really know your ... Read More »

In Search of Tomorrow ✓

(over 2 years ago)

I read the first ten chapters. I'm going to be honest, this is cliche. The absent parents and something school-related pushing two very ... Read More »