Kelsey Garman

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15 days ago S. E. Cates said:

I'm desperately seeking swaps for my story, "The Carnival of Fallen Stars". Let me know if you're interested.

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23 days ago Miriam (The Dreamweaver) said:

Could I get a read for my spoken-word poem, 'Drowning'? I'd appreciate it......even though you'll mentally rip out my vocal cords for asking. Anyhoo.....thanks for actually reading this!

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2 months ago Maimoona said:

Hi! It would be really awesome if you'd read/heart Bright and Beautiful for me. It's only 3 minutes long. If you need me to read something of yours just let me know. Thanks! (: Sorry if I already posted this CONTEST ENDS TODAY!!

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2 months ago Threa said:

Hey, I would love it if you'd read Complicated. If you enjoyed it please give it a heart. If you want me to read/heart one of yours just let me know. Thanks! (: P.S If I already asked you this, please ignore. SOOO Sorry! AND PLEASE HURRY THE CONTEST ENDS TODAY!

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3 months ago Cait Cher said:

Dear friend, I know you probably get these a lot and despise them very much, so I apologize to begin with if you wouldn't care to swap with me. If you actually don't mind, I really appreciate it. I need some feedback on either or both of my two stories, Dangerous and Like Laying In Daisies. I will be more than honored to read any of your works. Thank you so much. P.S. If I already came to you, I do apologize as well.

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White Phantom

(4 months ago)

This was good, though I do think you need to flesh a few things out. Your transitions are a bit shaky, work on smoothing out the sectio... Read More »

Run.

(12 months ago)

This was a nice piece. I like the idea you have here, and the characterization you've built. You did switch between tenses, however. You ... Read More »