Zach Bissett

My Writings

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    A Boy and His Machine

    Shorty story excerpt; a banished prince must take an important package through a dark forest. This story takes place in the same fi…

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  • Moonchild
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    The Missing Moon Child

    The opening pages to a contemporary fantasy project I'm working on. Feedback is greatly appreciated! INFLUENCES: A Song of Ice and …

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  • Night garden wormwood
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    Under the Wormwood

    Edited opening to a novel related to "The Missing Moon Child." Please HEART and READ, thanks!

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  • Place just west of here
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    Girl From Class

    Observational writing exercise I did awhile ago.

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  • Place just west of here
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    A Place Just West of Here

    A short story about three college grads living in a Rhode Island sea cottage. They dream of going to New York, Europe--anywhere off th…

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  • Place just west of here
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    Into the Night

    *FIRST PRIZE "The Gift" contest

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Talk to me!

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9 months ago Catherine Hart said:

http://figment.com/books/672504-The-Orphan-And-The-Wolf

What's better than a romance between a girl and a werewolf? (Well, ice cream. I like ice cream more than romance... anywho.) The Outsider would very much appreciate any and all help she can get on her story "The Orphan and the Wolf" so let's all pick up our correction pens (or... computer keys...) and give a hand the best way we know how: Constructive criticism and a healthy dose of compliments.

Hop to it!

Catherine Hart

(P.S. This is not a swap request. If you would like to swap, then ask The Outsider. Please do not post on my wall asking for a swap.)

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11 months ago Ziggy Faith said:

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12 months ago Kylie Marie said:

Hey! Care to swap? If so, please read Paper Hearts. In return, I'll read anything of yours. Thanks.

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about 1 year ago Natasha V. said:

Hey! My friend Ali Hart posted a new story, and she would love some feedback. She hasn't been very active on Figment lately, and she'd really love if you could read/heart her story. It's called A Casual Explosion, and here's the link: http://figment.com/books/481978-A-Casual-Explosion If you want to swap, please reply on my wall, as she doesn't always check hers. :) Thanks, and I'm really sorry if she or I have already asked you or if you don’t like swaps!

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over 1 year ago Mackenzie Kelley said:

Hi, I am entered into a heart based contest so it would mean the world to me if you would read my story It's Not Okay and heart it if you like it. If you don't do free reads then I am open to swapping. If you have already received this or don't do swaps I sincerely apologize for bothering you.

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My Reviews

Who, Me?

(over 1 year ago)

"He didn't give a cigarette butt about anyone." Haha, good line. I like this piece, the narrative voice is strong and consistent. I li... Read More »

The Tulip Rapist

(over 1 year ago)

This a nice style to open a story, a vague, almost in-medias-res intro. However I'd continue saying “he” the entire time and never “the m... Read More »