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about 3 years ago Tibby Kay said:

Good afternoon (morning, night) how are you on this fine (terrible, all right) day?

I am going to do something phenomenal, ask you, dear figmenter, for a swap.

Okay, not that astronomical, but better than spam, right?

If you concur with this insanely original idea, please read Angel of Despair, and give whatever reaction you deem fit. It is for the Brandon Sanderson contest, so keep in mind hearts are what wins. But, I'm not looking just to win the competition, I also want to win your heart. So don't give it unless you think I deserve it.

After you have read my short story please, leave a comment on my wall to tell me what to read.

Danke schoen for reading this, and I'm very sorry if I ruined your day. Ttfn, ta ta for now!

~Tibby

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about 3 years ago KIWI said:

Hello, interested in a swap? If so please read my story, Fearless. I will read anything of yours in return(tell me if you want anything of yours read first). If you are not open to swaps, please forgive me, I try my best to check your descriptions first, but can slip up a little. And yes it is a contest entry. Thanks for reading this comment anyways.

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about 3 years ago SoPro Critique said:

Hello, you! Do you like swaps?

Well, what if I offered you a one-sided swap? I read and edit yours, and you don't have to read any of mine. 100% guaranteed and 100% free.

My name is KD Larker, and I'm a freelance editor based in New York. I recently created a website (http://soprocritique.blogspot.com) and I'm looking forwards to helping writers from all over the internet, such as yourself.

All you have to do send me your story (the text itself, not a Figment link), your story's title, and your genre to soprocritique@icloud.com. If you want specific critique like "How is my dialogue?" or "Does x make sense," add a note!

If you have any questions, please read my FAQ! http://bit.ly/1tS9sRP

Thank you so much for reading. I hope you help us both out and submit. :D

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over 3 years ago dana said:

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over 3 years ago J.C. Marie said:

Would you like to swap flash fiction stories? If you read and review "Shine," I will do the same to one of yours. Thanks!

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Smoke and Mirrors

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PLOT REVIEW: CHAPTER ONE AND TWO Okay. The plot is interesting. It's steady and doesn't go too fast or too slow. Chapter 1: Chapter... Read More »

Smoke and Mirrors

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Chapter Two: Detailed Review Let's start off by saying this: I liked Chapter Two. Chapter Three will be up soon. The plot keeps going. I... Read More »