Mackenzie Kelley

My Writings

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    Political Referendum

    It's a dog eat dog world, or so I have been led to believe. Which means that as the alpha dog I must eat Darren, but what about Valeri…

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    It's not Okay

    In the scheme of thing that are unfair, this one takes the cake. One lonely teenager, fighting with her inner emotions, has to come to…

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    The Spring Rites

    Fidan is an oddity among all of the nymphs in the forest. All she wants is to feel like she belongs. Her wish may be answered in a way…

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    Happy Days

    Jenn leads a life that should be amazing, she's rich and her mother is a star in the fashion world, but just because it should be goo…

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    The Lake

    What means the world to you? For one teenage girl, it's her camp on the lake and being able to spend one last summer together as a fam…

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about 1 month ago C. Van Asch (Chesster) said:

Figment is moving to Underlined! So either transition when Underlined opens (early November) or find a new writing website. You need to save your writing! If you don't believe me check the home page or the forums pinned post.


11 months ago Haley Kissell said:

Hi there! I'm Haley *waves* it seems like it's been awhile since anyone stopped by to say hello so I thought I would. Have a great day and I hope to maybe hear back from you.



over 1 year ago Karla said:

Please check out my story "Dont Be Afraid of The Beast." if you can give me some feedback, I'm still working on the grammar but I would love to know how am I doing, I would appreciate it! Thank You Have a good day!!!

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over 1 year ago C. Van Asch (Chesster) said:

The last Eldrazi Titan, Emrakul, has arrived on the plane of Innistrad. Innistrad, is where Vampires, Werewolves, humans, Angels, Demons, and many other species share their home. Liliana is the last hope for Innistrad. In the mist of the horror Liliana, Tamiyo, and another planeswalker called Savage are the only hope, the three must stand together to defeat Emrakul, the Promised End.

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over 1 year ago fireboltstarx360 said:

Hey love! I would love if you could check out my first writing. I have read your story It's not Okay, and I really liked it. Would appreciate if you could check out my story. Thanks!

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Broken Angels

(almost 5 years ago)

I have no critiques for you. I didn't pick up on any major grammatical mistakes nor do I think your content needs any fixing. I love the ... Read More »

A Love to Kill

(almost 5 years ago)

You have a great hook here. It does a good job of arousing the curiousity of the reader. Watch out for tense. You start off with I was a ... Read More »