Jennifer Sieben

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about 1 year ago M.L.E. Mae said:

http://figment.com/groups/17788-Loki-s-Fangirls-army-

Join the battle for Loki's freedom.

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about 1 year ago Glowing Star said:

Hello! I am here, not asking for a swap, but more requesting for your opinion on my new story Deception. It is a little over ten minutes long and I am wondering if I should continue with this new inspiration in this story. I will do a swap if you feel it needed but free reads are always appreciated. Please follow this link to my new story! http://figment.com/books/662258

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over 1 year ago Carlos Ordaz said:

Hello dear figment world, my name is Carlos and I am an aspiring writer who dreams of becoming published. I'm sure I share a similar dream with most of you. I'm on figment in an attempt to build a fanbase and improve my writing. In the few months I've been on this site, I've already learned and improved so much. I would be honored if you were willing to read a short story of mine and provide some feedback. I would be happy to return the favor, just post what you would like me to read on my wall. Becoming a published author is my dream and I've decided to risk everything to chase my dream. I'm taking time off from college to pursue this dream of mine and I would be grateful if you decided to read some of work. If you like what I wrote and only if YOU think I'm worthy of it, I would be honored if you followed me. Thank you for your time and have a lovely day.

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over 1 year ago Ae Clane said:

please heart "Separate Dimensions".

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almost 2 years ago A.G. Wade said:

Gallavanting griffins! Thankee m'dear! :D Methinks I'll take a look at some of your dear bookies.... ;)

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The Graveyard Boy

(over 1 year ago)

This is a very intriguing beginning to the story. A few things to work on as you continue: 1. Characterization. I'm getting a very go... Read More »

Ocean

(over 1 year ago)

It is interesting so far. I think one thing that could help improve this though, is some more description. Especially to your characters.... Read More »