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almost 3 years ago iio said:

Hi would you like to swap? If so could you please read ' Who are you '. Feedback would be great! Also a heart and reaction if worthy. Thanks


almost 3 years ago Plummy said:

For your side of the swap could you read anything of mine? (I'm not picky) I have a few flash fictions, but the rest is poetry if you only critique one over the other! thank you.


almost 3 years ago E. J. Barney said:

Hey, I am wondering if you'd like to swap. If so, may you read "Beautiful"? Thanks for your time!


almost 3 years ago Arianna Lennox-Nightingale said:

Hey, could you do me the honor and check out my contest entry "Cool Kids"? If you'd prefer, I don't mind swapping:D


over 4 years ago Floral Flower said:

Hey, I'm new here and I need your opinion about my lyrics. Yes, I'm lyricist, I write songs and I love it, but I really need other people opinion about my work. If you would check out my lyrics I would check out yours work. Good luck! :)

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Bridget's Hair

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