Jaclyn Bartlett

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about 3 years ago Tibby Kay said:

Good afternoon (morning, night) how are you on this fine (terrible, all right) day?

I am going to do something phenomenal, ask you, dear figmenter, for a swap.

Okay, not that astronomical, but better than spam, right?

If you concur with this insanely original idea, please read Angel of Despair, and give whatever reaction you deem fit. It is for the Brandon Sanderson contest, so keep in mind hearts are what wins. But, I'm not looking just to win the competition, I also want to win your heart. So don't give it unless you think I deserve it.

After you have read my short story please, leave a comment on my wall to tell me what to read.

Danke schoen for reading this, and I'm very sorry if I ruined your day. Ttfn, ta ta for now!



over 3 years ago Anna Browne said:

**Just post on my wall after you have hearted the pieces what you want extensively read & reviewed ! Thank you!**


over 3 years ago Alec Snow said:

Swap? If so, please read "Muse Academy". (note: I've been getting a lot of people who don't swap but never are heard from again. Please only swap if you are going to give me a heart and/or comment).


about 4 years ago Sherlock Holmes Jr said:


Would you like to swap? If so, please read King Moriarty and I shall return the favor with any story with a similar/shorter length, nothing any longer.

If you are the type of person who prefers that I complete my end of the bargain first, I will. But don't forget to complete yours!



about 4 years ago cake (by the ocean) said:

Hi! I'm looking to swap with Facebook users. You see, I have entered a short story into a Facebook contest and I really need votes on it.

Voting is completely private. You won't need to add me, nor will I see your profile or any of your details. You have to like the page, which will then redirect you to my story. There's a vote button on the right. Enter you e-mail address and hit vote.

In exchange for your vote, I will read anything of yours and give your feedback.

Thanks, Cake

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