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about 1 month ago Cynthia Rose said:

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6 months ago C. Van Asch (Chesster) said:

Would you like to do a swap? If so please read the prologue of Amonkhet.

With the Approach of the Second Sun, time is short and death is near. Only the light can stop the God Pharaoh and his plans. Heroes will die and... only the worthy will rise when the God returns.

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9 months ago Andrea Maller said:

Hi! I'm trying to get feedback on a novel I'm working on called Vision Zero. I would appreciate any and all comments you have about how I could improve it. Sorry if I already asked. Thanks!!!

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over 1 year ago C. Van Asch (Chesster) said:

The last Eldrazi Titan, Emrakul, has arrived on the plane of Innistrad. Innistrad, is where Vampires, Werewolves, humans, Angels, Demons, and many other species share their home. Liliana is the last hope for Innistrad. In the mist of the horror Liliana, Tamiyo, and another planeswalker called Savage are the only hope, the three must stand together to defeat Emrakul, the Promised End.


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Jin's War

(over 3 years ago)

So of course, grammatical stuff first! “…Naoki Kataoki, he was not…” Run on sentence/comma splice. The first sentence about Rie was... Read More »

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(over 3 years ago)

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