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    The Girl

    A young girl daydreams before dinner.

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    The World of Trimunus

    Teenage and young adult females are taken from their planets and brought to a completely new enviroment, where they must be trained to…

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    Rain in to Rainbows

    Nettie is a delinquent who has one chance to prove she can turn her life around, then she meets Anton. He is the 'good kid'. Could the…

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about 2 years ago Amanda Yancey said:

Thanks! There are definitely more stories to come. I'm planning on writing an entire book!

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over 2 years ago Neona Nyx said:

Could you read how to steal a soul

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almost 3 years ago Neona Nyx said:

sorry I deleted it but if you're still interested please read "The Untamed"


about 3 years ago Joni Marie Girod said:

Up for a swap? If so, please read/heart/review/comment on Valor's Victim and I'll do yours in return! Thanks :)

~ Joni ~


about 3 years ago William Carter said:

Hey, there.

So yeah, I did the dreaded thing that you're not supposed to do on Figment: I entered a heart-based contest. The Brandon Sanderson one. I'm pretty sure you've heard of it.

*Takes a really, really, really long sigh*

Oh well.

Anyway, let's get down to business. I need to gain at least 250 hearts for my short story Demon in three days. A lot of people say this is impossible, but I'm going to try to accomplish this monumental task anyway. I mean, we're all writers, right? We'll do a lot of things that are hard to pursue this dream of ours. That's what I'm trying to do with this contest.

So, if you read my story Demon and leave a comment, then I'll read one of yours that is 1,000 words or less. And I'm sorry, but I will not go first. If you ask me to go first, then I will simply delete your post on my wall. I'm not trying to be harsh; I just don't have the time to read your story immediately.

If you do swap with me, then I'll get to your short story before the new year if my story ends up getting 100 hearts or less. However, if my story ends up getting 200 hearts or less, then I will get to your story by the end of January. I understand this is a long time to wait, but unlike a ton of other people on this site, I'll read your story in its entirety and I will give you a legitimate comment (or a review if I really liked it). Since there will be a lot of swaps I will have to complete, it's going to take me a while to read everyone's stories.

So yeah, if you read all of that then high five! You're awesome. And now I don't know what to say so . . . Yeah. Have a good day, no matter your decision! :D

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The Dark Prince

(over 2 years ago)

I have enjoyed reading a few chapters, but I noticed many simple mistakes throughout. Such as in chapter 2, the third sentence in the fir... Read More »