Nessa Hansen

My Writings

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    Without Breaking

    *Some language and sadness.[Name is subject to possible change.] The story takes place between two people whose life brings them t…

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    I'm Coming Home

    A man comes home for Christmas hoping for a miracle from his family a miracle, he is scared, he isn't good enough for. (I take…

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    Dead Days

    (Some cursing and language may not be suitable for those who don't like it so please be aware there is some in this story!!!) Follo…

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    Happy Family

    The Happy Family has a secret one that will make her stronger, or break her very will.

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    Pandemonium Derangement

    See what you want and feel what you will...

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    Virus

    Dark poem.

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about 1 month ago v.c. snow said:

You're not stupid for asking! It's a reasonable question.

What I mean is that you switch from past tense to present tense. For example, "she looked," would be past tense (the action has already happened), but then you sometimes switch to, "I blow," which is present tense (meaning the action is happening now). You need to stay in the tense you've chosen, which from the beginning of the story, was past tense. Does that make sense?

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about 1 month ago David Livingston Hawkins III said:

I usually don't spam but my new poetry collection DEATH AND ALL HIS FRIENDS and I'd love to have feedback. Please leave your thoughts and tell me your favorite poem of the collection!

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2 months ago Stormie "Ducky" McNeal said:

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I KNOW YOU ONLINE

A hipster and the most popular guy at school hate each other in real life... but, unknown to the both of them, are each other's best friend online.

At least, unknown until now.

This is my most recent contest entry, for the #InternetBesties contest held by Figment! I have to write a story where two people who are best friends hate each other in real life... and I have to write it in under 2,017 words!

If any of you could PLEASE visit my page and let me know what you think of it before the deadline (Feb. 12th), It would make my day!

If you prefer to swap instead of free read I am willing to do so. Just no erotica (I'd rather NOT defy my mother... I already piss her off enough).

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2 months ago v.c. snow said:

You already read it. Sorry about that!

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2 months ago v.c. snow said:

My side of the swap is done! Please read "i remember" when you get the chance. Thanks!

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I'm Coming Home

(4 months ago)

Thank you all for the reviews and the advice helps a lot. It also helps in other stories and/or future ones. I did question threw and thr... Read More »

Darkness

(4 months ago)

I wouldn't change anything about it!! Read More »