Scorpio Ryder

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    Machina

    July Challenge Winner! 750 words limit --> Except I have added an additional chapter because of the many comments saying I should add …

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    Nothing. Nothing at All.

    This is only a first draft!!! Annie is the youngest in her family with three older brothers, and while she tries to get them to acknow…

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    Be Strong

    A Narrative Poem about the holocaust. Based off of survivors accounts, but the characters are fictional, and there may be some rearra…

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    Vengeance of a God

    *Finalist (THANK YOU, for those of you who voted/hearted/and or gave me great advice!)* Imagine a world where sickness could vanish- a…

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    Deception

    A story about a teenage hacker, NASA, a contest, and a foreign threat. It's long, but anyone who wants to read it, comments and revie…

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    Illusion

    ** In PROGRESS!! ** Photo credit to my little sister, who helped create the design ** Thia is a mysterious girl who has a dark past. M…

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10 months ago Sekerya Mackenzie said:

I am so glad I came across "Breaking Pace." You have a real talent for capturing a bundle of emotion at once. I struggle with that, so I admire your work.

As a fellow runner, I agree running is an art of sorts. I have been running track since I was eight and I have an extreme passion for hurdles. Training is everything, and I love how you touched on that. An entire summer of training for one race; that's exactly how it is.

It actually took me six years to break into long distances, because I've always ran the sprints. For the last year, I've started heptathlons and it has become my focus, but I still run individual events.

I love your story(s)!

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over 1 year ago Austere Rex said:

Hey there! Would you like to swap? :D Please give me your feedback on 'Myth no. 1121301' http://figment.com/books/985615-Myth-no-1121301 Thank you! Write on my profile what you want me to read!

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over 1 year ago joel beebe said:

sorry nevermind

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over 1 year ago joel beebe said:

Swap please, if so read(and review) Fighting Arena, then get back to me on what you want me to read and review

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over 1 year ago Konri Gakusha said:

Hello, do you wanna swap? If so, please review either Unraveling or Hymn of the Wayward. In return, I will review whatever story you want me to (please give a review, not a comment).

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Reluctant Acceptance

(over 2 years ago)

I like how this kind of reflects a story, and yet also is like a letter to someone. It has an interesting intensity that builds up toward... Read More »

Don't Just Ignore

(over 2 years ago)

Oh wow. I love this one as well. The rhyme help the flow feel really smooth, and I felt like the message was conveyed powerfully. It feel... Read More »