5arah

My Writings

  • Unknown
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    Run

    This is my shot at a mystery. Not sure if I should continue, so reviews would be much appreciated!

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  • House-finch
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    A Song for the Dead

    A girl loses more than her family one day while hiking in the woods.

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  • Numb
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    Numb

    A short poem about feeling numb. Hope you like it!

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  • Waves
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    Listen to the Waves

    This is just a short poem thing about listening to the waves. Hope you like it!

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  • Radical_radial
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    Hey, It's an Airplane!

    This is my fist story, so please be gentle. It is very short. It is a very cheesy, but a very cute story about how two people can meet…

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over 3 years ago Ben Waters said:

Sorry for not responding in over 2 months but i read your story, story of the dead. Really good story. Anyway could you read my newest story in return? Thanks

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over 3 years ago Amanda Wagner (OFFLINE) said:

Hey up for a swap? If so, can you please read Jungle Woman. I will read anything you ask me to :)

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over 3 years ago Caitlin Reid said:

Hey! I just wanted to let you know I didn’t forget about our swap, I’m just swamped with things to do! I’m sitting down today and getting as many that I owe finished, I should get to yours. If you ever think I forgot, remind me. :) Thanks! You should receive a review from me soon, darling.

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over 3 years ago Lisandra said:

Hi, would you like to swap? I have a story called The Element of Fire that I would love some feedback on. If you only wish to read the first chapter that is perfectly okay with me. Thank you for your time!

Arwen

over 3 years ago Arwen Thatcher said:

Hi. I'm Arwen and I was wondering if you'd be open to do a swap. If you are, then it'd be great if you read 'The Tracks of Our Tears.' I only have three chapters up so far, but I'll add more as soon as I write them :) . I'll do longish reviews...usually a paragraph at least and most likely more. And I'll be honest. If you do this, I expect the same, please. :) If you wanna swap, post the name of the story you want me to read on my wall and I'll get back to you asap! I look forward to working with you.

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Poison Was The Cure

(over 3 years ago)

I thought it was good! I think you did a great job with the imagery and the story line. It kept me hooked. I didn't like some grammatical... Read More »