Carlos Ordaz

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    This Time I Mean It

    *Currently Being Adapted Into A Screenplay for an Independent Film* Abel and Valarie are the perfect couple. They’re just not in …

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about 1 year ago Michelle-Alexandra Brown said:

I just became part of a group called "Feedback" where story swaps are done. Would you like to join?

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about 1 year ago Arietta Coleman said:

Hi! Would you like to swap? I just created the first chapter to my story M & D Forever and would love some feedback. I'll read a chapter of one of your book in return. :)

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over 1 year ago rose said:

Hey guys whats up? Just uploaded through Stage(chapter) 14 on unwanted company! Come check it out and leave a comment of what you think:)

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over 1 year ago Rachel D. said:

I am so sorry, I didn't mean to send that so many times!!!

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A Curse to be Cured

(almost 2 years ago)

I have all eight chapters and since I'm not a copy editor I cant offer much in the way fixing your error but there pretty of them. I sugg... Read More »

Semicolon

(almost 4 years ago)

Chapter 1. you have solid imagery and details.I personally don't like the name sapphire but that's mostly a personal thing lol. ... Read More »