Saleena Nival

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    Arc

    A story arc.

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    Love Thy Enemy

    Ava Martinez is a vampire slayer. Aiden Smith is her prey. She should have no qualms about killing him when he poses as a normal teena…

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    A Warm Embrace

    When hope is all lost, a pair of footsteps can change everything.

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    Things Have Changed For Me

    Here are my pieces for the 29 day writing challenge. Each chapter is a different day. I'm a bit behind, so I will add and switch chapt…

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    From Fire Comes Ash

    9 year old Peter Noman lives at an orphanage in the run-down city of Falten, and he hates it. From the orphanage's bitter owner Lady C…

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    Incandescence

    A piece about a man's obsessive love affair.

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1 day ago SemperConspexeram said:

I got my review of Arc up! I'll hopefully be able to get your other piece done soon. I gave you a wow because there isn't a button for "writing satisfaction" or "grinning maniacally at the screen because that was great." :P

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2 days ago Caitlin Cox said:

I would love to swap, go ahead and read whatever peaks your interest :) have an amazing day!

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2 days ago WingsofAnEagle said:

Thanks for the lengthy review! I feel bad that I couldn't offer one that is as long, but really... your story was almost flawless! I was surprised at the general clarity and excellent descriptions. I will definitely work on the things you listed, though I am dreading working on the scientific aspect of the "end of the world". Maisy didn't fall asleep after watching the TV, she fainted. I will make sure to clarify that. Also, I did express Maisy's emotions, but I was told that to cut if out because apparently "readers know your character is going to be scared." I'm getting told some conflicting things about my story. Well anyways, just thought I'd clarify those things and say thanks for doing this! Keep writing your piece, it's very well written! Thanks for your time, to! Happy writing! ***Willow***

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3 days ago Erin Rae said:

Yeah, I'd love to swap! Since you asked, would you mind going first by reading either Eccendestiast or Think of Home? And yesss I'm glad you think he's hot haha.

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3 days ago An9e1 said:

Hi, I'd like to do a swap. I saw that you're busy, so if you don't want to, that's fine :) I'd read any of your pieces of you'd read my poetry collection called Sponge-State Recollections. Get back to me if you can, but don't feel pressured if you're already busy :)

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Tremors

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I review as I read, so here goes: The Accident The very first part of The Accident seems unnecessary. Everything you tell us, we sh... Read More »

Written in the Scars

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Chapter 13: "For the first time being, he was just on another long visit to the friend zone, where he met with overthinking and jealou... Read More »