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My Writings

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    Love Thy Enemy

    Ava Martinez is a vampire slayer. Aiden Smith is her prey. A novel-in-process. Warning: some adult language and content

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    From Fire Comes Ash

    9 year old Peter Noman lives at an orphanage in the run-down city of Falten, and he hates it. From the orphanage's bitter owner Lady C…

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    Things Have Changed For Me

    Here are my pieces for the 29 day writing challenge. Each chapter is a different day. I'm a bit behind, so I will add and switch chapt…

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    A Warm Embrace

    When hope is all lost, a pair of footsteps can change everything.

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    A piece about a man's obsessive love affair.

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    The Words Within Me

    This is a poetry book full of every poem I have or will write. So I have written so many poems already and lately I seem to be spittin…

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I'm a mess

3 days ago DontPutOnThatDress said:

Hi would you care to swap? If so, could you please read and review/comment on it. Thank you!


5 days ago Dusty Parrish said:

Hello! A few weeks ago you read my story "Consumed by the Void" and left an awesome review. I wanted to let you know that I re-worked the first chapter if you were interested in going back through it again. If you want, I'd be more than happy to take a look at more of your stuff in return for another review, just let me know. :3

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13 days ago Ellie Williams said:


13 days ago Deer said:

Hey, would you be interested in a swap?

I'm just looking for feedback on any of my works. The majority are short poems. I offer the best of my ability in feedbacks when doing swaps and hope for the same in return.

Hope you're interested, thank you and have a good day.


13 days ago N. A. CIRA said:

Hai! I know you don't know me, but would you be interested in a chapter-by-chapters swap? I'd like my book Wings of Dark Deception to be reviewed. It's a 30 + upper middle grade fiction novel, but I only post chapters as people read them (and obviously, I don't expect anyone to review the entire book).

So if you review one chapter, I'll review one. And then if you review two, I'll review two. And then if you review three...I think you get where I'm going with this.


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My Reviews

Golden Rule

(4 days ago)

I'll review as I read, so here goes: "you don't heed the extra stares from the ladies and the glances from the males" I think this ent... Read More »

If The Gown Fits

(12 days ago)

It isn't very clear what the betrayal was specifically. I also think you could expand on the prologue because everything seems very rushe... Read More »