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6 months ago Spirit said:

A swap sounds fun! I'd love it if you could read all four chapters of The Violet Hours, each chapter is a short poem. But if you're looking to read one piece, could you read Artemis & Athena?

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6 months ago Holly Rayne (Mystical) said:

Thanks for the comment!

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6 months ago Holly Rayne (Mystical) said:

I did my side of the swap!

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6 months ago Holly Rayne (Mystical) said:

I'll Swap! Please read From One To Another (as much as I have written so far)

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6 months ago Danielle Rose said:

Hey Saleena, just read the start of your novella. If you could read my book (don't worry its just one chapter right now) The Right Side of Wrong and let me know what you think that would be lovely. Criticism is much appreciated, at this point I'm not sure what I'm doing right and what I'm doing wrong. Cheers!

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The Right Side of Wrong

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