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almost 3 years ago Rachel D. said:

Thanks for the heart on Beauty, I appreciate it!

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over 3 years ago Trail of Glitter said:

Hi, would you like to swap? I have TWO offers, and you (hopefully) will choose one of the two:

1) Please read/comment "Oh, Madeline." It's a short song, or poem, about a minute long. Of course, I'll only swap that story with yours that's LESS than 3 minutes to read. If you like it, please heart it.

2) If you're more of a novel/short story reader, please read/comment "When You're Gone" OR "Living in the Moment." Please HEART it, if you think it deserves one!

Now, here's the catch. When it comes to stories, I want actual feedback. Not "Oh, it was nice; I like the plot" or "very vivid descriptions." I want MORE than that. Tell me why you like it, what needs to be changed/kept, and grammar (because I know there are several errors.) I don't want anything vague, I honestly want REAL feedback. If you can't give me more than seven sentences worth of feedback, then just disregard this request.

I'm very good at writing comments/reviews, so you don't have to worry about me. I return swaps within three days.

Comments for Comments. *Reviews for Reviews. (NO HEART SWAPS).

*With reviews, you get as much as you give.

Thank you so much for your cooperation, and I look forward to swapping/speaking with you! Have a great day:)

-Glitter

Gina mialma figment

over 3 years ago Gina Mialma said:

Hey, wanna swap? I'll read first because I asked, just tell me what to read and if you could please read THE GENE RACE and give me an honest review I would really appreciate it, thanks.

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over 3 years ago ℬøø said:

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almost 4 years ago Dipreads by V.L. said:

Good day!

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Beautiful Monster

(over 5 years ago)

Wow... Thats all I can say! I am speechless, truely an amazing story.f The character of the killer remindeds me of Grendle's mother from... Read More »

de-composition

(over 5 years ago)

I can’t put into words how much I like this. The flow and the rhyme, just, wow. The message itself was hauntingly beautiful. Read More »