Lucero Kalata

My Writings

  • Trenches
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    Hell's Theatre

    My wounds will heal but memories Cannot

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  • Heraldry
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    The White Blade

    He woke up without a name or a memory. After almost murdering someone by accident, he was thrown in prison until it was decided what t…

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  • Capture2
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    Vigilant

    The empire of Tantraz has fallen apart by the South declaring independence, to be a free nation as it once had been. Zaylern is in the…

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  • Heraldry
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    The Brother's War

    The Empire of Tantraz has always been divided into the North and the South since its very existence. For the longest time, the people …

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  • Cover-normal
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    Torrent

    Rune Terrall was a regular college student living in the Northern Union when life was completely changed. After doing his younger brot…

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    See How the Nations Rage

    Evil people try and control the world today. Is there any way for them to change or is everything doomed?

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Catalyst 2

almost 2 years ago Catalyst said:

Hey, I was wondering if you could read my latest short story called, Last Holiday Love. It can found on my profile and all you have to do is tell me if I suck at writing or eh this kids okay. Thank you so much for your time. -Catalyst

Meli

about 2 years ago Melanie Camacho said:

Haha no idea why that previous message showed up haha. Anyways.

Do you want to swap? If so let me know on my wall and read my book Sisters for Life :) Link is below

http://figment.com/books/916534

Meli

about 2 years ago Melanie Camacho said:

http://figment.com/search?category=&page=36449&site_search=&type=users&utf8=%E2%9C%93&x=59&y=26

Meli

almost 3 years ago Melanie Camacho said:

Want to swap? If so please read http://figment.com/books/862657-No-Title

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about 3 years ago Lucero Kalata said:

Ask me something, anything.

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My Reviews

Springtime Fire

(over 4 years ago)

You did a very good job with only having 250 words. I saw a few mistakes that can be fixed. 1."I sat in the field, and watched the bu... Read More »

The Outlander

(over 4 years ago)

I thought this was a good idea and concept, but you need a lot more semi colons and periods. Your paragraphs had many run-on sentences. ... Read More »