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R A Black

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About Me: Looking to break out of the slush pile. SWAPS: PLEASE GO FIRST. I'm only interested in swapping with those who want genuine feedback. I leave long and detailed reviews, and I would expect the same from you. Please leave specific comments because if I can't tell from review if you've read the book I won't return the swap. Looking to swap for Lock Stock and Two Smoking Goblins at the moment. PLEASE NO POETRY I might do free reads if I'm in the mood or you ask me in the right way :) I'll also give you a detailed review in return for a short positive comment on Amazon etc if you buy my book. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Follow my facebook page for book updates and creepy inspirations

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    Lock Stock and Two Smoking Goblins

    Byran Tarn is a thief with a reputation for meticulous planning. Lylabelle is a were-kitten and a walking lesson in being careful what…

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    The Worst Kidnapping in the Galaxy

    It... it wasn't supposed to go down like this. <br> Xct, alien student, was on a mission to meet his hero, a human rock-star named Z…

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    Happily Ever After

    They say that endings are just new beginnings and that could not be more true for Lavie Streaver. A noblewoman turned knight, she and …

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    The Look on Your Face

    A short story I threw together for a story-telling evening I'm running. The artisan has finished his masterpiece, but cannot get i…

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about 1 month ago Andy Wyatt said:

Hello, it has been a long time since I've connected with you on here. I remember you giving me amazing pointers on writing. I am planning on rewriting The Vampire and His people I would be forever grateful if you could give me some much needed advice along the way. I can also give you feedback as well just let me know which story you need feedback on. Thanks!

Theia

about 1 month ago Cynthia Silver☾✯ said:

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4 months ago Sinanxis said:

Hey! It's been a while (don't know if you still remember me XD), would like to review-swap? :)

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4 months ago Dimitri25 said:

Hello R.A. Black.

You said in my post that I was using Passive Voice and telling. What exactly is passive voice? and also do you mean telling and not showing? (for that reason the story is narration from the 17th century man's pov, but the story does have three pov narrations from three characters, but the main one is the heroine/protagonist). Or in what ways was this telling?

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7 months ago Haley Kissell said:

Thank you so much for doing the author chat for us. The FFG can't thank you enough! Is there anything we can do for you in return?

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