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3 months ago Naomi Folettia said:

Hi! I just wanted to let you know that I have completed my part of the "first 3 chapters review swap". In case you don't remember, you have already done your part.

Happy writing! :)

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3 months ago Ellie Williams said:

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3 months ago Naomi Folettia said:

Hi! Just got to you for our "first 3 chapters review swap". Took a look at Dirt, still have a chapter to go. Just in case you don't remember, you did review Liaffon (my swap side) 3 months ago so I'm just completing my part of the swap.

I'm not insisting you do it again but I have updated Liaffon since then. Idk how much you remember and I probably haven't addressed all the pointers you gave me but if you're interested in checking it out it would be great.

But if you don't want to, I will understand :)

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4 months ago Helana said:

Hello! I was wondering if you were interested in a swap. If so, please read "Safe & Sound" and let me know what you want me to read :)

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4 months ago Naomi Folettia said:

Hi :) Just to let you know I haven't forgotten our 3 chapter review swap between your "Dirt" and my "Liaffon Book One East Seekers". As a side note, Liaffon's chapter 2 is divided into two parts for easier reviewing but it is still one whole chapter.

I will read yours first and let you know when I have finished reviewing :)

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