Bryan Jonsson

My Writings

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    This is my Aka

    My entry for the Coming of Age contest. Please give feedback of all kinds.

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  • Carved heart
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    I'm not too happy with the ending, so if you have constructive feedback I'd love to hear it.

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  • Cover-normal
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    Just playing around with describing a scene. It's in very rough shape. I plan to add to it periodically and perhaps grow it into a s…

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over 3 years ago Selena Shandi said:

Hello fellow writer! I am looking for feedback on my writings and was hoping you could help. You can read anything you like of mine and I will try to return the favor as soon as possible. My first page is mostly short stories and one novel in progress and after that would be my poems. Thank you for your time and assistance! :)


about 4 years ago Zach_Ragan said:

hey im writing a new book. It's called "the Unknown!" would u like to swap with me and read it? thanks!


about 4 years ago Elizabeth said:

‘Ello there! So…I just wrote a new story, and am on the hunt for critiques. A free read would be so, completely, unimaginably awesome, but I understand if you want to swap instead ;) Seems to be the only way to get people to read your work lately. Anywhosers, if you happen to be interested just stop by my wall and take a look at “Last of a Line”. If not…I’m terribly sorry for wasting your valuable time. Please accept these virtual marshmallows as a token of my enormous appreciation ;)


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about 4 years ago Gina Mialma said:

Hello, wants to swap? I've already read THIS IS MY AKA and I would really appreciate it if you would read my story DICE, thanks.

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(about 4 years ago)

It isn’t until the fifth paragraph that we get the first hint of setting: somewhere outside with a stone wall. Please give more details ... Read More »


(over 4 years ago)

Chapter 2: Pick one: lesser man or boy. Don’t switch between them. It’s confusing. “I could have your heart” sounds really really... Read More »