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over 5 years ago OvercomingDyslexic said:

Hey Sarah, I'm Lexi :) So I wrote this short story that's kind of a spin-off of The Little Mermaid and I was wondering if you might check it out? I'm not real sure about it so I could really use your advice:) It's called Language of Love (And Water) if you ever have the time.

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over 6 years ago Emily Simmons said:

"For being so kind as to recognize me"? hahah, please don't worry dear, I am a friendly person and am personally amazed at having gotten such lovely responses on figment :D I am glad we have the comment boxes now because polite and kind advice/feedback like yours really makes me smile, and I like to be able to thank people in a place where they know they have been thanked :)

Hope you're having a good time on Figment!

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over 6 years ago Emily Simmons said:

Thank you for the lovely review Sarah! :) When re-writing narrative poems, it's hard to know where to start, but if I do improve it again, which I'd like to, I'll keep your advice in mind :)

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over 6 years ago Alice Berry said:

Hey!

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Death's Governess

(over 6 years ago)

I really love your concept for this piece! It sort of reminds me of the concept for "Gossamer" by Lois Lowry... not the exact same story ... Read More »

The Paper Girl

(over 6 years ago)

This poem has so many emotions and scenes that just flutter out from the screen. I simply loved your format and your tone of writing! I w... Read More »