Liora Nutella

My Writings

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    A Grown Up Now?

    Just a poem I wrote on the train today. I'm thinking of submitting it to a contest so I'd love constructive crit.

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    The Richest Man In the World

    After he kills Ms. Byrne, he believes that all threats have been removed. He is a free man again. Until he receives a phone call telli…

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    Karl's Tale

    Karl is an assassin during a fictional revolution. Inspired by I Never Told You What I Do For A Living by My Chemical Romance

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    Portal

    A young man who wakes up in the dressing room of a theater and has no idea how he got there. A perplexing tale soon unfolds. ~in progr…

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    All You Are Left With Is Darkness

    A poem about revenge and someone who becomes blind

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    The Golden Watch

    A short story taking place during a fictional war about the meaning of time and our dependance upon it.

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7 months ago Ignorant-to-Life said:

Hey, Liora Nutella! "The Library" is being reinvented! Come join in!! :)

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8 months ago Eowyn Doyle said:

Creative Contests is having a comeback! Please come check it out! Note: please remove your book from the member's books unless it has won a contest to prevent things from become cluttered.

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over 1 year ago Sophia Edwards said:

Hey! So I've read and reviewed Portal. Please, if you haven't yet, read A Wielder's Trials. At least read the first chapter.

When you've completed your part of the swap please let me know in the comments.

Thanks :)

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over 1 year ago Sophia Edwards said:

Hey! Are you interested in swapping? If so, could you read the first chapter of "A Wielder's Trials"?

I'll read anything you like of equal length and review or comment it based on what you are able to do for A Wielder's Trials and I will reciprocate.

Let me know once you've completed your end and tell me what you'd like me to read!

Thanks :P

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My Reviews

Slayer of the Sun

(over 1 year ago)

This poem was really interesting... One suggestion I have is to look at the enjambment, or how the lines are broken up. I think it could ... Read More »

Advice to a Dog

(almost 2 years ago)

I usually don't like pet stories but this warmed my heart! I truly enjoyed reading this. It was very refreshing. Some feedback: ["Hell... Read More »