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5 days ago Melanie Camacho said:

Could you please heart my story? (it's only 750 words)http://figment.com/books/862657-No-Title I will comment and heart any story of yours up to 2,000 words! Please help me by hearting it!

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11 days ago rae said:

Hey! My name's Rae.

I just opened up an open group roleplay called "Banded". It's based off of the TV show 'Red Band Society'.

If you're not familiar with the show, it's about a bunch of teenagers who stay at a hospital due to their disabilities. They make friends, lovers, and enemies along the way. They also still have the struggle of dealing with their illnesses and treatments. It's all part of the journey!

So that's pretty much the roleplay! You should go check it out!

http ://figment. com/groups/29325-Banded-a-roleplay (remove spaces after "http" and before "com")

Enrique and i 2

3 months ago Melanie Camacho said:

Please comment on my story! It's only 986 words and a WIP. I jus need some feedback on wether I should continue it or not. Also like I said it is a work in progress so not all of the details are finished yet. So should I continue? Please let me know with a comment or heart or both :)

Link is here.

http://figment.com/books/832642-Ninja-Trials

16 year-old Megan was born into a family of peasants yet she longs to be more. When the Warrior Master trials start she eagerly jumps at the chance of being a contestant. One wrong move and she fails. Join Megan as she proves wether or not she has what it takes to become a true Warrior Master.

Enrique and i 2

4 months ago Melanie Camacho said:

Would you please read my book for me and tell me what you think? It doesn't have to be long :) I would greatly appreciate it! I want to turn it into a novel but in order to do so I need reviews/comments. It doesn't have to be in depth either and you don't have to read the whole thing! Please!! http://figment.com/books/769618-From-Crush-To-Love

Enrique and i 2

4 months ago Melanie Camacho said:

Would you please read my book for me and tell me what you think? It doesn't have to be long :) I would greatly appreciate it! I want to turn it into a novel but in order to do so I need reviews/comments. It doesn't have to be in depth either and you don't have to read the whole thing! Please!!

http://figment.com/books/769618-From-Crush-To-Love

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The Things That People Need to Hear

(over 3 years ago)

They are really good but u need to work on flow more for. If here is know flow it's distracts the reader Keep worker on it :) Read More »

Storms

(over 3 years ago)

well it is not always easy to make a happy poem but you did a pretty good job with all you need to do is edit it more and work on flow if... Read More »