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2 months ago Melanie Camacho said:

Please comment on my story! It's only 986 words and a WIP. I jus need some feedback on wether I should continue it or not. Also like I said it is a work in progress so not all of the details are finished yet. So should I continue? Please let me know with a comment or heart or both :)

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http://figment.com/books/832642-Ninja-Trials

16 year-old Megan was born into a family of peasants yet she longs to be more. When the Warrior Master trials start she eagerly jumps at the chance of being a contestant. One wrong move and she fails. Join Megan as she proves wether or not she has what it takes to become a true Warrior Master.

Enrique and i 2

3 months ago Melanie Camacho said:

Would you please read my book for me and tell me what you think? It doesn't have to be long :) I would greatly appreciate it! I want to turn it into a novel but in order to do so I need reviews/comments. It doesn't have to be in depth either and you don't have to read the whole thing! Please!! http://figment.com/books/769618-From-Crush-To-Love

Enrique and i 2

3 months ago Melanie Camacho said:

Would you please read my book for me and tell me what you think? It doesn't have to be long :) I would greatly appreciate it! I want to turn it into a novel but in order to do so I need reviews/comments. It doesn't have to be in depth either and you don't have to read the whole thing! Please!!

http://figment.com/books/769618-From-Crush-To-Love

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4 months ago Dani23 said:

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The Things That People Need to Hear

(about 3 years ago)

They are really good but u need to work on flow more for. If here is know flow it's distracts the reader Keep worker on it :) Read More »

Storms

(over 3 years ago)

well it is not always easy to make a happy poem but you did a pretty good job with all you need to do is edit it more and work on flow if... Read More »