My Writings

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    Of the Sun and the Rain

    <b>Second Draft In-Progress</b> <br>Victorian England has one constant: death. It comes for everyone eventually and Avery Elsyng is n…

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    "Home is where I can never return..."

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    Ephemeral Ethegia

    **Not looking for critiques. It's just me (briefly) spilling my guts to get something out of my system.**<br> Today was my birthday …

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    **More spilling of my guts, but this time, light critiques will be welcomed :)**<br> Every time I see you, I write one more poem abou…

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    It Likes to Repeat

    "Then there is silence..."

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    **Yayyy more gut spilling (vent poetry) I should really just put these into one book already shouldn't I? :'D**<br> I can't believe i…

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3 days ago Noceurx said:

I'm sorry I'm taking so long to get to everything, but thanks for all your patience ; o ;

Swaps will be temporarily closed due to how much stuff I need to catch up on ._.


SWAPS: Audie White, Dusty Parrish, One Lost Pilot, wxnderlust

COVERS: Catherinne Clifford, Jordan Parker, Ziggy, Ella, Sierra M. Daw, Rose K


6 days ago Stephanie Horror said:


Oh goodness! Your trip sounds so, so, so amazing! :D I would love to visit HK. Only because of the stationary shops. xD I watched so many videos on Youtube of penpal letters and I remember this one Youtuber receiving Japanese/Chinese stationary from a friend of hers that's actually from there. It was mostly designed in Panda Bears. ^0^ I wuvs Pandas. Her stationary was so cute! ^0^ Gah! I need some. xD Even if I have no use for it yet because I have so much already tehe. I envy you so much! xD I'm so happy you had such a great time shopping! :D Next time, take me and Callie with ya! < 3

Only problem is I won't be able to speak the language. o.o I should take lessons. Eeeeep!

Your Uncle and Aunt sound so adorable! XD gah! I hope they have a wonderful and happy life together. ^-^ I have to admit, I never been to any weddings. xD I'm hoping soon though when my best friends get married someday! Eeeeeeeep! Including you. d:

I'm so ready to be a bridesmaid. ._. And a Aunty. ^0^ I tell Callie and my other friends, Kala and Wolfy this all the time and they're like, "You're gonna be waiting for a while!"

Gah! xD

Durian stands...? *Googles it*

Sorries sissy. I had to Google that because I didn't know what it was. I thought it was some antique until I saw it was a fruit. o.o They look so...bristly. o.o I'd be scared to touch one. xD Does your family like them? o:

Alsoooooo...I went out driving yesterday. d: Mom needed some crafts from Walmart so I drove her there. I did good. ^-^ She says I need more city driving learning and learning how to parallel park. Then after that, I can go for my test. :D I'm excited but sooooooooooo nervous. o.o

Do you like the Subway? What's that like? xD I always wanted to go on one for the experience. I have a confession to make.

Speaking of colleges, Full Sail University was my dream college at first. c: It really was because of the writing majors I want to take. The classes they have seem so amazing and interesting. But...after traveling to Boone, NC. There's one college I saw that is my dream to go to. It's called Appalachian Mountain University. This college is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo beautiful! And so huge! :D When you first see it, you'd think it'd be one of those private schools that belong hidden somewhere out in the far country in the mountains. It is so gorgeous. It even has it's own Subway too! :D I remember seeing this cute guy go down these stairs underground besides their city bus waiting post. o: It was amazing. xD Ugh! I wish I could visit and take a tour. From where I live in SC, it would take me six to eight hours to get there. o.o Not bad, but eh. .-.

Also, just to give ya some advice sissy, I wouldn't worry about college just yet till you hit your senior year. c: Because for me, senior year wasn't that much hard. The teachers, of course, still taught and wanted you to take your quizzes, tests, exams, blah blah blah. But the teachers and counselors will mostly push you about taking your SATs or ACTs. o: And of course, pushing you into researching colleges. The counselors will (well, they did this for me and everyone else in my senior class) take you out of class or lunch to have you sit down with them and discuss your plans about what you want to do after you graduate. They will help point you in the right direction of where you want to go in life, which school you want to go to, how many credits you will need to earn in order to graduate and get accepted into a certain college with whatever rank your GPA needs to be.

Sounds stressing, I know. was very, very lots of fun. c:

Gah! With all of this school talk, I want to go back to school now. I was actually looking into Appalachian Mountain online yesterday, and I was a bit confused? They have a writing program, but I wasn't sure if it was on campus or online...They weren't too clear on that. I might have to check into that again later. If nothing, Imma call them and ask. ^-^

I hope you're having a safe and great day today, sissy! Talk to you soon~ c:


p.s., what do you think of PVRIS's new songs? xD

p.s.s., So...BVB isn't coming out with their new album this year, but the follow year. ._. They postponed it. ._. Hmph. BUT! Andy's new solo album will be coming out this year according to the press d: Andy is making another Andy Black album! ^0^

p.s.s.s, I'm so ready for BMTH to come out with a new album already. .-.

p.s.s.s.s, I know that MIW already came out with a new album this year, but...I wish they would start making a new one already. xD Gah! Ricky is still forever gorgeous! That smile! That face! That wittle skinny body! Gah! *hides face in pillow* He can't get any gorgeous, can he? It's impossible! *stalks Ricky's twitter and Instagram* Nope. Nothing is ever impossible. xD


9 days ago Dusty Parrish said:

Hey! I'm glad to hear your vacation went well. Sorry I've been a bit late in responding to you myself. D.d

Oh, wow, you didn't have to read all of them, but thank you for doing so. Oooo, I look forward to seeing which one you'll review ;3 No problem, thank you for taking a look at my stuff.

Hopefully the story gives a lot as well xD I saw that it was a second draft and I almost wish I had found your page earlier so I could compare the two versions. I've caught up with reading everything you have I just need to go back and write a review up for the chapters. I've been debating on going back and doing even more editing on Consumed by the Void xD I've been fighting the urge to do so until I finish this draft, but it's so hard O.O (I know chapter 3 needs SERIOUS help because I wrote it all on my phone) I tried adding both of those in mine too, but it didn't seem to help me either (the "WIP" and "in progress") Right? xD That moment is one of my favorites as well!

No one seems to have heard anything like it x.X Even one of the people where I work who used to be a member of the geek squad at best buy or whatever was having a hard time figuring out what it could have been >.<

I completely agree with what you said about not finding one (traditional or digital art) better than the other. They really do both have pros and cons. I'd love to see more of your art as well, your style is so cute! I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE Nanomortis' art so much! The style and the colors are so aesthetically pleasing to me I've always had a thing for limited color with hints of red, blue or gold


15 days ago wxnderlust said:

A story with adventure, relationships, and plenty of tests, The Flare focuses on twins Frederick and Francesca as they succumb to the ways of an underground lab, surrounded by others close to their age that are stuck down for the exact same reason as them: they will all be the future of Earth.

If you'd like to know more, check out the book by visiting my profile or clicking the image above! Only the prologue is up so far, but I would love some feedback.

Of course, since this is a swap request, I'd be happy to read something of yours that is around the same length in return.

I hope to hear from you soon! Thanks for your time. :)

▷ wxnderlust

Big bros 4!!!

27 days ago |-/One-Lost-Pilot|-/ said:

Hi would you care to swap? If you do have the chance, please read "A Different Heaven" that would do me such a huge favor. I can also return the favor by reading any of your works if you want! Thanks alot!

Sincerely, One-Lost-Pilot -Don't be a SILENT READER! Tell me what YOU think is best for my writing!

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