Alaura F

My Writings

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    Looking From the Other Side

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  • Just friends
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    Just Friends

    Ivy and Leo hated each other when they were younger, but now things are different. Maybe now they can help each other. Maybe now they …

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  • A new life
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    A New Life

    Manuscript for my creative writing class. Vinny struggles with her new existence as a vampire.

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  • Dressing up
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    Dressing Up

    Writing exercise based off of a prompt in Brian Kiteley's book "The 4 A.M. Breakthrough". #165: Dressing Up. Write a short scene in wh…

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  • Cecilia
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    The Lady of the Blind

    Cecilia was born blind, but she may gain the gift of sight if she can succeed in trials foretold. Fairy tale written for my Children'…

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  • Decisions
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    Decisions

    Writing exercise based off of a prompt in Brian Kiteley's book "The 4 A.M. Breakthrough". #192: Alcohol. Write a short exercise about …

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Balloon

over 1 year ago Amy A. said:

Hi! I'm working on a piece titled "Choking on air" It's for a competition, and I'd really appreciate any insight pertaining to the short story. Thank you for taking the time to read this, and if you don't have enough time or simply are not feeling up to it, I apologize for taking your time. Thanks! :)

Smile_grin_48

over 1 year ago Andrea Maller said:

Hi! I’m working on a new novel called Vision Zero and I’m trying to get feedback to make it better. Any ideas would be greatly appreciated. Sorry if I already asked. Thanks!

Catalyst 2

about 2 years ago Catalyst said:

Also i have a friend who lives in Reno, she has lots of good friends, but doesn't like the area to much. She told me it's dull and not much happens. She even told me you guys have no panera there.... I pray for you.

Catalyst 2

about 2 years ago Catalyst said:

Hey I'm sorry to bother you, but I just posted my newest short story called, "When The Leaves Change" and it would mean the world to me if you read it and just told me if I suck or eh this kids okay. You may find the story on my profile. Thanks so much for your time and have a wonderful day.

-Catalyst

Overcoming

over 2 years ago OvercomingDyslexic said:

Hi Alaura, I'm Lexi :) I just added a few new chapters to my sci-fy romance story "Your Gravity" and I could really use some feedback. If you have the time, would you mind looking it over? Your opinion would be really helpful :) Thanks!

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My Reviews

Capitol On Fire

(over 4 years ago)

This is an intriguing take on the Games- how Esme, unlike others in the Capitol- cannot bear to watch them. I really liked how you portra... Read More »

Your Cinderella

(over 5 years ago)

Oops.. Didn't realize you said review lol.. This is definitely really creative and a nice twist to the Cinderella story- it's not as if ... Read More »