Mari

My Writings

  • The dark triad
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    The Dark Triad

    Set in a dystopian society, eight teenagers are arrested and sent to a prison that looks almost like its own town. Only, they're the …

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  • Over mine strewn fields (2)
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    Over Mine Strewn Fields

    Dystopian love story that takes place 1500 years into the future during a time of war. 5 young boys are being trained for combat by an…

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  • Just friends (1)
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    "Just Friends"

    What happens when someone who's afraid of commitment develops feelings for a friend.

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  • Jackie thompson
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    Wrong

    Somewhere between a poem and a letter, this is something that I wrote at like one in the morning expressing how some people make me fe…

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  • Finding cara
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    Anxiety

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  • Heraldry
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    Taming the Tigress (old)

    Old draft of "The Dark Triad"

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about 3 hours ago Nicolas Abo said:

Hello there! I know that normally you also had to review my "The Journey" that is about an hour long, except for "Catastrophe, Pacifism and Honour" (Because I read your two hour work). I have a trade. I have greatly reorganized and edited CPH and I am wondering if you'd consider rereading and reviewing it again, considering it's about an hour now too. Message me when you can about your decision ^^

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about 19 hours ago Angela Romano said:

I'd be happy to do some kind of ongoing swap; maybe for now, two chapters for two chapters?

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1 day ago Wiwaxia said:

Sure. I'll read the Dark Triad first. Would you be interested in reading either The Third Eye Series or A Nice Psychedelic Moment?

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1 day ago The One And Only said:

Hi ^-^ I'd love to swap. The Dark Triad seems interesting but I don't have anything of that length, so perhaps I could read something shorter? Something preferably 10-20 minutes long.

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4 days ago Caspian Vinson said:

Hey Mari! Sorry it took me so long to get back to you, but I had work and then other stuff to deal with when I finished. Actually, if you look at the more recent review on "Dreamer", you'll see that your comments have been echoed (honestly makes me feel a bit crappy with all the negative press, but at the same time, I have great comments to look back on, so my ego can take the beating for quality's sake!) Although, yes, it does still sting. I'll get over it... eventually. Have a lot of editing to do (I edit as I write, not a good strategy I know, but I can't help it). There won't be many more reviews of Dreamer for a while...

Oh, sorry about you being removed from the "swaps" section! Yeah! I'll keep going with Dark Triad. There's only one more full chapter for "Dreamer" (and part of chapter 3 about to be posted).

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Catastrophe, Pacifism and Honour

(1 day ago)

The plot of the story was very interesting, there's a lot of action going on the keeps the story moving, and I like how you have multiple... Read More »

Consumed by the Void

(2 days ago)

Chapter 5: *Insert disclaimer about ramblings and confusion and blah blah blah all that good stuff* "...in the [antique] shop.." Also,... Read More »