Nikolas Lagesen

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    Enlightning

    So I don't know how good these concrete details or whatever are, but I tried I guess? (And that is not a typo in the title) (Get i…

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    The Trip

    It's got some cursing and drug-related stuff in it.

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    Betrayed

    Based off of a dream I had, so there are probably some logical inconsistencies. Some violence if you're sensitive to that kind of t…

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    Strange

    i think there's probably some cursing or something

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    The Price of Freedom - Chapter 1

    This is a follow up to what I wrote last week. I've written this chapter like four times, but I never like it. You don't really need t…

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    The Price of Freedom

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5 months ago Ryan Macomber said:

thank you for the feedback on my novel, Nik! I tried to do a flashback in chapter one, I'll probably change that because as you said, it sounded the same. That was not my intention, but thanks for telling me about it. I really appreciate it!

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My Reviews

Bruised Bruise 2

(9 days ago)

I can say with full confidence that the intensity of your descriptions were raised with each passing line, and you have the imagery to ba... Read More »

The Little Potted Plant

(9 days ago)

You know, I expected a little story. Instead, I got a piece of poetry that kept me reading. Your use of language is wonderful (though som... Read More »